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haiku in haiku

yesterday, we had a ladies day out. in celebration of visiting the little town of haiku on maui, we all wrote some haiku:

the clouds are partinghaiku, a little town on maui
what a glorious sun-sight
welcome home ladies

january women
lapping up the maui wind
clouds rush to the sea

their shouts of defiance
echo through ‘iao valley
damning the waters

royal winter sang
welcoming the warrior
offering her hand

haiku: little town hugs
the foot of the vulcano
where the poems grow

the interesting image from a trip through maui comes from jknee

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  1. Annie says

    What wonderful images, thank you for sharing. At times it is as much fun to hear about a trip than to go yourself. Peace, Annie

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  2. isabella mori says

    thanks for your words, annie! i’ll be posting my “twitter diary” in the next day or so, hopefully you’ll like it, too!

  3. Su @ ecopup says

    Hi there, Netchick sent me :)

    Great haikus, beautiful images!

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  4. Thomas says

    This is great! Thanks for sharing!

    By the way, Netchick sent me. :)

    Thomas

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  5. Roger says

    Wow, Maui in January… you poor soul. ;)

    Love the fisheye lens photo!

    Here from Netchick’s!

  6. isabella mori says

    thanks, everyone!

    to anyone who wants to know what all this “netchick sent me” is about, go here:

    http://netchick.net/2009/01/29/%E2%80%9Chello-netchick-sent-me%E2%80%9D-meet-n-greet-4/

  7. sbi home loan says

    The poem is wonderful. You have painted the whole surrounding so beautifully. The images are also good.



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